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[TOME Episode 04]

Hmmmm - I'm starting to get worried about his series. My fears from earlier a being realised. The plot isn't moving on quickly enough, there's no clear story arch, the whole thing seems far too episodic. The characters aren't developing fast enough, either. They are developing (There was a point where Nylocke acted seriously for once, we also learned a bit about the real lives of the characters, particularly Gamercrazed), but sure enough, they're starting to feel shallow. The only two characters I can say I feel are perfect are Kirbopher (probably because he's just real life Kirbopher) and Rockoon (because he's just too crazy-awesome for me to care about character depth. The Slime-guy, Demon King and the mysterious bad guy are also brilliant, real-feeling characters. I'd like to see more stuff like with Demon King, who had real life reasons and justifications for his actions. However, I understand that its a cartoon, and that it doesn't need to be too realistic. Maybe it feels uncomfortable because some characters are deeper than others.

Another smaller niggle is that, although it was overall entertaining, there were no laugh out loud moments for me (unlike in previous episodes). Maybe you're getting a little bored, running out of jokes - so spice it up a little! Make it more interesting! I know you won't want to change the story, but maybe if you make the characters more real, the jokes will come easier.

Overall, still an amazing, well done series with lots of time and effort put into it. Just don't let it get boring!

Thanks - a concerned fan

Kirbopher responds:

Thanks! I think maybe this more laid-back episode might not've been up your alley, but the fact that you're very invested in the characters themselves makes me think you'll really enjoy the next one. Stick with it!

[LUCKY DAY FOREVER]

I love this film so much, 5 stars and all that, but I personally would have enjoyed it more if he got to the other side and it turned out that it was exactly the same, but people had white skin.

[Job Care]

First I was like yay, and then her eyes started bleeding and I was scared, but then she said "con-fucking-form you worthless human slave!". That made me giggle.

Blordow responds:

don't be afraid, it's just tomato sauce :(

[Oddball: Cameraocular]

This is brilliant! Luschious voice-acting, smooth animation, fitting music and heaps of style! I absolutely cannot what for more oddball! <3

[Bounty + Hunter]

Oooh, what did you use, what did you use?

Was it Blender?

LenZ responds:

I used Maya

["Summer Rec" Preview]

:D! Brilliant! I also noticed the girl who bastardised her grandfather's culture!

[Entropy]

I liked the style and the Dan-O music, but then after the time stop thing ended and there was a new song, it suddenly ended. What's up with that? work on your storytelling, and please create more stuff like this!

SwedishPlumTrees responds:

Thanks for the review. Yeah, more was supposed to happen, but I ended it because I was afraid I wouldn't finish it in time for NATA. But thank you for the support. =)