ok, but...
Visually, yeah, it's pretty good, and I can see that you must've worked hard on it, so I don't wanna sound too harsh but... I think you need to work on your storyline. I can see that you just wanted to see what you could do with this style of animation, but, to be brutal, it was kinda boring.
This may have been coincidental, but you appear to have taken inspiration from the Tales of Brackenwood for this peice. I'm fine with that, absolutely, as long as you do it well. That's all I'm saying.