TheWight's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[~Play~]

ok, but...

Visually, yeah, it's pretty good, and I can see that you must've worked hard on it, so I don't wanna sound too harsh but... I think you need to work on your storyline. I can see that you just wanted to see what you could do with this style of animation, but, to be brutal, it was kinda boring.
This may have been coincidental, but you appear to have taken inspiration from the Tales of Brackenwood for this peice. I'm fine with that, absolutely, as long as you do it well. That's all I'm saying.

[Rhg6: Fllffl Vs Terantula]

OK...

Kinda random, but is terantula really FLLFFL's son?

[Astromiau EP 01]

AWESOME!

I love Astromiau! Please make more!
The animation was brilliant and I think the style ofit is very cool. Most of the jokes were great and I applaud you for making such a long flash. The theme tune is AWESOME.
All I really think you need to work on are your voice acting skills, I don't speak Spanish but I think it could improve your flash. I also hope there's more action and adventure in future episodes.

Thanks 4 readin'
Byeee!

[Sixgun Space]

GLOOooorious!!!

I LOVED Robo Rageous and, if that's even POSSIBLE, I enjoyed this... EVEN MORE!
Geeeezzz... you guys did this in ONE. DAY. Just IMAGINE what you could do in a MONTH!

Keep it comin'!

[|~Snow Snow For Lucy~|]

Amazing!!!

Beautiful, just... beautiful.
I cannot express the emotions this incredible peice of art stirred within me.
So much talent put into the art, animation, and heart-wrenching storyline it's simply indescribable. By now you're probably thinking, "Why the 9?!". Please, allow me to explain:
Sometimes, I felt that the storyline wasn't clear enough, and that you needed to focus more on the dialogue, rather than the visual story. I also felt that you could've explained the inventor more, maybe with a backstory, because he was a really interesting character, and his death left me feeling I wanted to more about who he was, how did he get there?
That is all.
Thank you.

[This girl I like..]

WAIT a minute...

Didn't you jus steal this song from Darkar?

JoelOnToast responds:

A friend of mine showed the creator this flash. Hes perfectly cool with it.

[A Robo Western]

Great,but...

As usual, you astound me with frankly AWESOME art, animatition AND voice talent, not to mention a great storyline, but, as always, there seems something missing. Maybe it's just me, I dunno, but I get the feeling you try too hard to cram an AWFUL lot into short webtoons. The only submission to date I haven't had this problem with was Backwards Day. I think this is because it was the only one where you focused soley on comedy, rather than trying to be both serious AND comedic at the same time, which frankly, (sorry) doesn't work. Also, you always introduce the characters VERY briefly, and I hardly ever feel a real connection unless they're in more than one episode. You never really develop your characters much either. Aside from this, GREAT submissions, keep up the good work!